I have to revise my first draft today.

我今天必须要修订我的第一个草案。

When you revise your draft as a whole, pay attention to content, organization and length.

当你以一个整体来修改草稿时，注意内容、结构和篇幅。

In today's lecture, I'm going to talk about how to revise essay drafts and give you some tips as well.

在今天的讲座中，我将谈一谈如何修改文章草稿，并且也会给出一些建议。

I have to revise my first draft today.

我今天必须要修订我的第一个草案。

I have to revise my first draft today.

我今天必须要修订我的第一个草案。

So, do you think you can deal with this and get  a revised draft to me by the end of the week?

那么，您认为您可以处理这个，并在本周末 给我一份修改好的草稿吗？