Break up the introduction section into logical segments by using subheadings.

用副标题将引言部分分成逻辑段。

Remember to break up the section into logical segments by using subheadings.

记住用副标题把这一节分成逻辑段。

Break up your results into logical segments by using subheadings.

使用副标题将结果分成逻辑段。

For example, witchcraft is categorized under Judicial Relations, subheading Capital Crimes.

例如，巫术被归类在司法关系下，副标题为死罪。

The subheading of the articles stupefied people.

文章的副标题使人们茫然了。

A new study, the subheading said, " confirms a long-held theory that builders used the river to transport the heavy blocks that comprise the ancient wonders."

副标题称，一项新的研究 “证实了一个长期以来的理论，即建筑者利用了河流来运输那些包含了古代奇观的巨型石块。”

Generally speaking, I feel you've often used complex structures and long sentences for the sake of it and as a consequence. . . although your paragraphing and inclusion of subheadings help. . . it's quite hard to follow your train of thought at times.

总的来说，我觉得你常用复杂的长句子，尽管你的分段和副标题可以起到帮助的作用，但是有时还是很难了解你的发展思路。