Sounds good. I'd be happy to look over a draft version before you hand in the final copy, if you wish.

听起来不错。如果你希望的话我愿意在你交终稿之前看一下初稿。

" We were shocked. My first version of the draft had exclamation points all over the place, but we eventually removed those from the final copy."

“我们非常震惊。我的初稿到处都是感叹号，但我们的终稿最终删除了这些感叹号。”